I am OCD about a lot of stuff! :D I should have remembered you had a script up -- I was looking mostly at the one at GameFAQs. While the dialogue itself seemed to be correctly transcribed, the description/comments by the author had odd tense changes and were badly, badly punctuated, leaving me with a headache.

"Alright" just makes my eye twitch.

I'm pretty sure it's "Your Grace" -- they seem to be following the style manual I use at work, and that's how we'd go with it! (I work with a publisher. That's where most of the OCD comes from.)

I am hopeless with ranks, be it in games or real life, but I shall remember that, for the off chance I need to promote someone in the Youth League. ;)